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I've been reading fanfiction for over fifteen years now, and this is something I have never been able to understand. Why do so many stories flit between verb tenses from paragraph to paragraph or even sentence to sentence?

I can completely understand how easy it would be to make these kind of mistakes if you change a story from present to past tense or past to present, but all stories can't have been edited like that, right? So what gives?

I know my grammar has been far from perfect and I occasionally have a thing for repetitive sentences and histrionics (among other problems), but I can say with complete confidence that this is a mistake I've never made unless I was changing the tense of a story while editing it. I'm not trying to single anyone out and I'm definitely not thinking of anyone in particular. It's just that I've been wondering about this for years.

So, can anyone out there enlighten me? How is it possible to get your tenses wrong when you're just straight-up writing a story? Have any of you guys done it?

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16/5/11 02:35 (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] rinkafic.livejournal.com
Thanks for the feedback. You made me feel warm and fuzzy and less self-conscious.

I don't actually have a story to go around the sentence, I made it up on the spot to annoy myself with. hehehee.

Thansk for bidding on me, that also makes me feel the love. :)

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16/5/11 02:41 (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] taste-is-sweet.livejournal.com
You're welcome. You deserve warm and fuzzy all the time. :D

And damn it, now I really want a story to go with that sentence...

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16/5/11 02:42 (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] rinkafic.livejournal.com
I shall add that sentence to either the hel_japan story or vacationathon story I have in progress. :)

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