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15/10/13 04:31 (UTC)
That's just it--it felt as though the author was tossing out the "all I want is marriage and babies" to justify the heroine's decision to marry someone else. It wasn't supported anywhere by the story itself. It was just a contrived plot device.

The male MC might have been awesome but when we meet him, he's telling his finance he needs the two of them to 'take a break' and yet he gets upset when she walks out leaving her ring on the desk. We are told they have weekly meetings to 'work things out' but we never see any of that. All we see is him turning into a mess because she left him. Gah. I can't even begin...
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