I'm Back! I hadn't realized I'd been so close to finishing up what you've got so far! Actually, I've been distracted by some of your longer SGA fic. It takes me awhile to get through longer fic these days. Hope to have some fb for you there soon.
As for this lovely and fantastic ficlet, awesome job yet again. I really feel for Charles and his new found burden. Sleep deprivation is harsh.
But this: And maybe it really was the exhaustion fucking with him, but suddenly all Charles could think of was the old lady with the little dog. He'd endured a whole conversation with her and then he found out later she was just as dead as her boyfriend Gerald
I was all O__O and then =D at that. So he really has no idea of reality atall right now, poor duck.
And then the interlude with Josh. The layers of emotional and physical relationships and boundaries are set up wonderfully. I like the complexity of what you're showing here.
Have I mentioned that I adore this story idea and your characters? Because I totally, absolutely do.
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3/12/11 03:18 (UTC)As for this lovely and fantastic ficlet, awesome job yet again. I really feel for Charles and his new found burden. Sleep deprivation is harsh.
But this: And maybe it really was the exhaustion fucking with him, but suddenly all Charles could think of was the old lady with the little dog. He'd endured a whole conversation with her and then he found out later she was just as dead as her boyfriend Gerald
I was all O__O and then =D at that. So he really has no idea of reality atall right now, poor duck.
And then the interlude with Josh. The layers of emotional and physical relationships and boundaries are set up wonderfully. I like the complexity of what you're showing here.
Have I mentioned that I adore this story idea and your characters? Because I totally, absolutely do.