Sink Your Teeth Right Through My Bones, Baby

I liked this, particularly for the feeling of disorientation and un-reality from Charles's exhaustion, and the residue from the nightmare (it is a nightmare, isn't it? With all the dead people?). I also loved the way you described the invasion of light - I know exactly that feeling of being stabbed in the eyeballs by unexpected switching-on of lights.

And damnit, now I'm really sleepy. :P