Really? I've never noticed you having tense flipping troubles, though I've certainly seen problems with POV changes. I was just reading a Hawaii 5-0 fic last night where this happened in the middle of a scene. I think it was intentional, but it still felt kind of awkward. I also agree that a beta should find these things, but sometimes we all miss stuff, I guess. :)
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15/5/11 22:59 (UTC)