Why do so many stories flit between verb tenses from paragraph to paragraph or even sentence to sentence? I wish I knew. It throws me right out of the story, and I have not, as of yet, come up with a gentle way to mention it might be an issue when I encounter it.
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11/5/11 07:08 (UTC)I wish I knew. It throws me right out of the story, and I have not, as of yet, come up with a gentle way to mention it might be an issue when I encounter it.