A fascinating piece, as always--the dialogue was entirely believable and had me hooked in an instant.
In particular, I loved how the narration went off on tangents... like when he was imagining what would happen as a result of his question before the old woman had even answered.
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27/10/08 04:02 (UTC)In particular, I loved how the narration went off on tangents... like when he was imagining what would happen as a result of his question before the old woman had even answered.
Lovely. Nice work, yet again. :)