Okay, for one--the first line had me laughing SO hard... :P
Secondly, this piece fascinates me. Despite the harsh (and hilarious) dialogue between the characters, there is a persistent undertone that says "hey, I really care about you." You managed to create characters that truly felt "deep," which is impressive considering how short the story is. Well--it's impressive regardless.
I loved this piece. Definitely one of my favorites.
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12/10/08 18:01 (UTC)Secondly, this piece fascinates me. Despite the harsh (and hilarious) dialogue between the characters, there is a persistent undertone that says "hey, I really care about you." You managed to create characters that truly felt "deep," which is impressive considering how short the story is. Well--it's impressive regardless.
I loved this piece. Definitely one of my favorites.
Good luck, and great job! :)