Hahahaha Gloria is awesome. I love how you've managed to make her sound like a right bitch but then shown how she actually does care beneath it all. Your dialogue is excellent, it brings the piece to life. I wouldn't envy Charles' job as being the peace keeper between Gloria and Josh. This story made me want to read more about all three of them. Great job and good luck :).
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10/10/08 22:21 (UTC)