Quick note: "Whomever designed you did a fantastic job," she said. That should be "Whoever".
Otherwise, this was brilliant! I'm with lalalaleigha on this - the questions I have are the right questions, and your descriptions are very vivid. (I would take out what she said about the "modern cars", though.)
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13/2/09 23:19 (UTC)That should be "Whoever".
Otherwise, this was brilliant! I'm with