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taste_is_sweet ([personal profile] taste_is_sweet) wrote2011-05-10 10:33 pm
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Feeling Tense; Not Feeling The Tenses

I've been reading fanfiction for over fifteen years now, and this is something I have never been able to understand. Why do so many stories flit between verb tenses from paragraph to paragraph or even sentence to sentence?

I can completely understand how easy it would be to make these kind of mistakes if you change a story from present to past tense or past to present, but all stories can't have been edited like that, right? So what gives?

I know my grammar has been far from perfect and I occasionally have a thing for repetitive sentences and histrionics (among other problems), but I can say with complete confidence that this is a mistake I've never made unless I was changing the tense of a story while editing it. I'm not trying to single anyone out and I'm definitely not thinking of anyone in particular. It's just that I've been wondering about this for years.

So, can anyone out there enlighten me? How is it possible to get your tenses wrong when you're just straight-up writing a story? Have any of you guys done it?
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[personal profile] busaikko 2011-05-11 12:44 pm (UTC)(link)
I do this! Fortunately, my betas usually catch it.

There are two reasons:
1. I'm writing more than one story at once, and bouncing from one to another gets me mixed up.
2. I'm writing in more than once place, usually getting brilliant(ish) ideas on the bus or in the store or at work and scribbling them down,a dn then adding them into the main file. And then realizing, damn.

[identity profile] mific.livejournal.com 2011-05-12 12:10 pm (UTC)(link)
I have just stared at your icon for five minutes, snorting.
*drags self back to writing fic*

[identity profile] taste-is-sweet.livejournal.com 2011-05-16 01:56 am (UTC)(link)
Ah but you see, those reasons make sense! And you use betas and listen to them. Besides, having read your awesome stories, I really wouldn't say it's an enormous problem. :D