ext_12308 ([identity profile] taste-is-sweet.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] taste_is_sweet 2011-05-15 11:02 pm (UTC)

Yeah! 'Your story might have been great, except your tenses bounce around like a hyperactive ping-pong ball so I couldn't read it' probably wouldn't go over well. :)
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