Help me figure this out, guys!

[taste_is_sweet]

Yes, I'm desperate enough to resort to polling. It also saves from having to go back and pick at the same damn paragraph yet again for another few minutes.

[Poll #1480999]

Comments

[ribbon-purple.livejournal.com]

Feral is almost always more fun. ;o)

[taste-is-sweet.livejournal.com]

True--though not always logical for the story, so it still bears some thinking. But it's always helpful to have outside opinions. :D